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Revamped site - Please review? 6 years 2 weeks ago #2968

  • Danielle
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Hi all,

My site can be found at www.daemuse.co.za and im not sure if its quite done yet? Please have a look-see and tell me what you think. I'm open to honest constructive criticism no matter how brutal :) Cant wait to know how it can be improved?
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Re: Revamped site - Please review? 6 years 1 week ago #2991

Hi
The only thing I found strange was that your home page didn't tell me what you were selling.. love the name by the way :)
I only figured out what you actually did when i clicked the next tab.
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Re: Revamped site - Please review? 6 years 6 days ago #3011

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I'll totally agree. You've included how you do what you do but not what you do. This should be evident at first glance. Your Portfolio page loads to long. If someone has a slow connection they'd leave because without you saying at first glance what you do and it taking long to find out, I'd leave also. Maybe you can separate the portfolio so at the top I'd put some text content saying what I do and how and why should people choose you, in a subtle way. Make sure it fits in with the feel of your website. Look at mysmallbusiness website, it says small business and community of entrepreneurs, so I know when I look at first glance on each page what this website is about. Search engines love content mainly in form of text, add more text. A website I worked on recently I used images only but added text that was hidden from the user but visible to search engines.

Nice fresh design!! Definitely inspiring!

Hope this helps.
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Re: Revamped site - Please review? 6 years 4 days ago #3015

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Thank you very much for taking the time to do that for me. Yes I recall telling myself that the homepage needed more description, then got caught up in the design. Thank you for the reminder :) Your feedback has been especially valuable and also very supportive. Thank you again!
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Re: Revamped site - Please review? 6 years 3 days ago #3018

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We've just been through a six month cycle of website design, redesign and so on - so I know the amount of work that goes into these kind of things.

What are you looking to do with your website? How far away is it from what you wanted?
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Re: Revamped site - Please review? 5 years 11 months ago #3048

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Hi, I liked it. Loved the colours and look and feel. seems to flow easily. :-)
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Re: Revamped site - Please review? 5 years 11 months ago #3058

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Hi Danielle

Great work on your website, the best element in it for me was they way that you seamlessly integrated various eye-catching colour combinations into your web pages.
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Re: Revamped site - Please review? 5 years 11 months ago #3104

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I think Im getting closer to having it the way I want it. Yes it is a long and tiring process but rewarding all the same :)
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