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Please review my website 12 years 6 months ago #1856

Hi Guys.

Please review my website and give me some feedback.

www.directsolution.co.za
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Re: Please review my website 12 years 6 months ago #1858

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The logo looks choppy. Might want to try clean it up a little make it look smooth and remove the drop shadow.

I understand you want the content on your site to be the center of attention but that does not mean you should center the text. Makes the text a pain to read. The text with the red background is the worst tho. Kinda hurts my eye to read.

Very little design. Just a background color and text. The little icons don't really help. They look random and make the page seem unprofessional.
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Re: Please review my website 12 years 6 months ago #1868

Hi There.

Thanks for the honest feedback.

I made some changes and followed your suggestions, would you mind giving me your feedback again please?

Regards,

Hennie.
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Re: Please review my website 12 years 6 months ago #1869

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The background colour is to much. I would go with a simple white or light grey background. Make the content a little smaller so people with smaller monitors don't have to scroll.

I quickly went in and changed the background and make the content smaller. You should also space your text out more. i51.tinypic.com/250lci8.png

If you serious about getting your web site up and looking good you should consider hiring a web designer. Those free bluevoda things are really terrible.
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Re: Please review my website 12 years 5 months ago #1891

hi Ethan.

ok point taken, these free site builders are terible, yet they do teach you a lot of things. I appreciate the feedback. now I have gone a total different route on the site. Would you mind taking another look at it for me please?
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Re: Please review my website 12 years 5 months ago #1907

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Its simple and clean however there is nothing eye catching about the site.

The animation feels cheesy and draws to much attention way from the content. Lose the picture of that computer. It looks old, no one used CRT monitors anymore.

This version is a better version but again I think you should look into hiring a designer.
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Re: Please review my website 12 years 5 months ago #1921

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I definitely agree with ethan to be honest the site doesn't look interesting at all, funny thing is it looks like our first project in doing HTML coding while i was in school, doing a website also needs artistry so that web visitors stays to your site longer.
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Re: Please review my website 12 years 5 months ago #1932

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Please check the mail on the site. I always think correct grammar and spelling show a site has been well done, in addition to all the graphics.
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Re: Please review my website 12 years 5 months ago #1942

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Hi there,

You have two typos that you should fix - helpfull should be helpful and tottaly should be totally.

Melanie
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